Friday, December 22, 2017

Last Updates of 2017

I'm a third of the way through Book 4, with a little over 35,000 words written. I also have the middle third mapped out, though still no idea how exactly that final third is going to play out. Still no title, but this book will feature Avery and, as things look right now, it will likely be one of the last books to do so for a while. There will probably be one more with him at some point after this, but the plan for the next year or two is to move onto a spin-off series of shorter novellas about Radium, the PMC I introduced in SCORPION II, as well as do a couple stand alone projects.

Also, if you like the books, please take a moment to leave a review on Amazon. Reviews are pretty critical for independent author's books to attract readers.

Wednesday, November 22, 2017

Best Books of 2017

When it comes to the spy/military/political/action thriller genre, everyone praises the mega-selling big name/brand name authors like Tom Clancy, Vince Flynn, Brad Thor, and Ben Coes. 

And perhaps Mark Greaney and Brad Taylor, both of whom are the current Thriller Gods, as far as I'm concerned.

But there are also plenty of lesser-known authors writing quality stuff who don't always get the attention they deserve, and the following are the best books of this year, at least according to my reading tastes, in chronological order.

Gun Metal Gray. There's numerous series about a lone wolf, superhero badass operator who gets into impossible situations and kicks everyone's ass and usually answers directly to POTUS. These books can occasionally be fun, but most of the time they don't hold my interest. Greaney's Gray Man is not only the exception, but also the best action series in print. What separates the Gray Man from the Mitch Rapp/John Clark clones is the morale ambiguity of the series and the lead character, with Court Gentry often caught in ethical predicaments and questioning what he should do; he thinks before he takes action. And then there's the over top, cinematic action scenes that Greaney somehow makes believable. And the complex, multi-layered plots; Greaney's books go way beyond just chasing and torturing Arab terrorists to stop a bomb from going off. Then throw in the accurate, up-to-date details on weapons, tactics, and espionage tradecraft, and the cool titles Greaney has found a winning a formula in this series, and Gun Metal Gray does not disappoint.

Dark Asset.  The fourth book in Adrian Magson's great series about a freelance security contractor who does jobs for the Agency. Sound familiar? Well, Magson does it far better than I can, and all books in this series are worth reading, as are the books in his other series about a British MI5 operator. 

Target Omega. Although this book felt somewhat generic at times, especially in the first half, what separates Peter Kirsanow's debut novel apart from the pack is the above average writing. Kirsanow is a far more intelligent and engaging wordsmith than, say, Thor or Coes. The premise of his book is interesting, and the nature of the threat, an EMP attack, is both original and plausible. His research is also solid. No generals commanding navy ships or characters jumping out of three-story windows while firing a pistol in each hand, or Iranians and Pakistanis with Arab names (I'm looking at you, Mr. Coes). Most importantly, Kirsanow also introduces an interesting lead character and a menacing antagonist whom I'm looking forward to reading more about in next year's Second Strike.


Price of Duty. This is a direct sequel to Dale Brown's previous book, Iron Wolf, so it would be helpful, but necessary, to have read that one first. This book basically shows what an all-out campaign of cyber warfare from Russia would look like; switching off Eastern Europe's power grid, shutting down a nuclear reactor in Romania, disrupting Poland's financial systems, and taking control of a passenger jet to crash it into a target. Responding to the threat is an American private military company working for the Polish government. 
Deep Black. This is the second book in Sean McFate's new mercenary series, and I cannot praise it enough. Do yourself a favor and read it, but only after you read the first one. I also suggest that any aspiring military/spy authors check out McFate's books to see how it's done; the dialogue, the action scenes, the details, everything is perfect and flows well.

Execute Authority. Apparently, this is the last book in Dalton Fury's Delta Force series, and it's the best of the five. Unfortunately, the author died shortly after completing the book, and it doesn't look like the publishers plan to continue the series with a different author. The book ends with a hint at the direction in which he perhaps intended to take his lead character, Kolt Raynor, from there.  Naturally, the one time I'd actually want the publisher to continue a dead author's series, they don't.

The Last Man in Tehran. This book hasn't come out yet, but I have no doubt that it'll be excellent, as have all of Mark Henshaw's other books, especially The Fall of Moscow Station. Henshaw, a former CIA analyst, has become one of my favorite authors. Uniquely for the genre, his main character is a woman. Rarer still, Kyra Stryker is a competent, capable, and well-developed character who comes across as a real person and is not a beautiful, tough as nails, supermodel Black Widow rip-off cookie cutter cliche who can outshoot, outsmart, and kick the ass of any guy.  This CIA-centered series is a basically a realistic alternative to Mitch Rapp or Scott Harvath.

So, go read any of these books if you haven't already. 

Thursday, November 9, 2017

Overtaken by Current Events

This is exactly why I have so far avoided writing about the Middle East. The geopolitical situation of the region can abruptly shift direction.

Almost a quarter through Book #4 (still no title yet), and current events are already out dating my story. I've just finished the first act, which details Avery's mission into ISIS-held Syria, and then the news came that ISIS has lost the last of its territory in Syria. Then there's the news that tensions are heating up between Saudi Arabia and Iran after Iranian-backed Houthi rebels fired a ballistic missile at Riyadh. The Saudi-Iranian proxy conflict in Yemen is the focus of the middle act of this book.

Something similar nearly happened when I was writing VIPER, when FARC suddenly announced a ceasefire, but I was able to work those events into the story.

Instead of rushing the book into publication or re-working the story entirely, which is potentially a waste of time as new developments in the region can swiftly make obsolete any revised plot anyway, I think the best recourse is to keep my story set within a very specific time period. This means once I've completed the novel and it's published next year, you'll be reading a story set one year in the past. 

Sean Mcfate has done with this with both of his books, SHADOW WAR and DEEP BLACK, perhaps for this very reason.


This is admittedly a First World Problem. The collapse of the Islamic State's physical caliphate is certainly welcome news, especially for a very troubled country and the unfortunate people living there, though its debatable if these people will be any better off under Assad's governance.

Sunday, October 29, 2017

Recommended Independent Authors

My earlier posts about self-publishing got me thinking about the quality of self/independent published authors versus those from a mainstream publisher. Generally, the latter will provide a better, professionally edited and written book, and more competent research, plotting, and dialogue. I've also tried many self-published authors whose work left a lot to be desired (as I have with New York Times bestsellers from the big five publishers, to be fair). 

But I'm not here to criticize or disparage anyone's work they spent months, if not years working on, so, in my opinion, here are your best options for independent authors. 

These guys have all turned out consistently entertaining, well-written books with engaging plots and characters, and deserve the commercial success and critical acclaim they've garnered. Reading these books, I can totally see them as a hardcover release from Putnam or St. Martins on the bookshelf. Except these books are much more fairly priced than a $30 hardcover or a $13 ebook.

First off is Jack Murphy. A former army Ranger and Green Beret, Jack Murphy has so far published four books in his series about Deckard, a former special ops soldier turned freelance operative. His books are unique in that they combine big, completely over-the-top, creative action stories with real life details and authenticity when it comes to weapons and tactics. The first one, Reflexive Fire, remains my favorite. Anyone who likes the The Executioner/Mack Bolan series will love Deckard.

Then we have Peter Nealen, a former Marine who has written multiple books in multiple series and is apparently an absolute machine when it comes to writing. I highly recommend his American Praetorian series, about a private military corporation in a not-too-distant dystopian future where the US is a mess domestically and is no longer a superpower. I loved all five books, especially Alone and Unafraid. The first book in Peter's new series Brannigan's Bastards comes out next month, and I am very much looking forward to that.

There's also Stephen England. His books aren't as heavy on the military aspects as the above authors. Instead he's closer to Vince Flynn, covering espionage and political maneuverings, with a dash of Robert Ludlum-esque global conspiracies. His books are also quite long, approaching Tom Clancy size, and each volume reads like the season of a television series. I've read the first two, Pandora's Grave and Day of Reckoning. Hopefully, I'll get to the third one soon. 

Next is JT Patten, a former intelligence professional whose books have received praise from Mark Greaney, Joshua Hood, and Dalton Fury. He's also made the cross from self-published author to landing a contract with a publishing house. His first hardcover from Kensington comes out next year. It's always encouraging to see a self-published get a major publishing contract. 

Elsewhere in this blog, I've recommended The Ronin Genesis by Steven Hildreth. Hildreth, who writes realistic CIA and Special Forces-based thrillers. His books are very well written, but unfortunately he does not appear to be very prolific. Hopefully, it'll be less than two years before his fourth novel is published.

AP Bateman is another quality author, and I recommend his books Lies and Retribution and The Contract Man, which cover the British side of things and focus on MI6/SAS.

Between the above authors, that's enough quality reading material to last you well into the next year at an affordable price.

Monday, October 23, 2017

Market Research II

Continuing from my last post below, I've been looking into other variables that contribute to the success of independent-published authors.

I'll set aside the matter of quality and won't name specific authors or books, because the quality of writing is rarely a factor in the success of a book; there's some atrociously written books that are hugely successful.

And these successful independent authors have a lot of things in common: Really slick, professionally made covers (that probably cost in the $600-1,000 range at least), a very strong social media presence, paid advertisements around Amazon, physical copies of their books available, multiple and frequent books in ongoing series, and lots of reviews very early on. 

Some of these are things I'll be working on. 

I've already been more active with this blog (which has correlated to more views and sales), and now I have a Good Reads page up and running, with an author Facebook page on the way. At least as a test, I'll try paying for advertising on the pages of related books on Amazon. 

Physical copies of the books are also something I'm looking into. (Even though independent authors generally have low sales with physical books but really high sales as ebooks. Maybe readers just think a book is more legit and professional if it has a physical release).

I also want to increase my productivity. From what I observed, the more you publish the more customs on Amazon see your work. I didn't publish a book last year, because I cancelled COBRA, and my sales took a huge dive during this period of inactivity. I'm aiming to have two books published next year (one will be an Avery book, the other will be COBRA).

As for reviews, this is a bit out of my control. Early on, I wondered how all these brand new books/authors suddenly have dozens of 4 and 5 star reviews coming in overnight, but then as I looked into finding ebook cover artists, I fund numerous sites providing "ebook services," which also entails paid reviews. I suppose it's also common for an author's friends and acquaintances to leave positive reviews to support the book, but I'm not going to ask people to give me positive reviews. For a price, one can also pay professional reviewers to review a book for their publication.

This is the first time I've really looked into the marketing and promotional side of things. It's a bit daunting and it takes a lot of the fun out of what is basically a hobby for me, so I've decided my time right now is best spent writing and finishing more books. 

Also, apparently I have some sort of following in Russia. A lot of this blog's traffic comes from Russia, and it's come to my attention that there's a pirated copy of Scorpion available for free on a Russian website. Not sure what's up with that.

Thursday, October 19, 2017

Market Research

I've been looking into the books in this genre that are selling well, and the popular books, the ones with strong sales and lots of reviews and attention (regardless of the qaulity of the writing and research) are all ones covering more topical subject matter: ISIS, Middle East, Korea etc. 

Which makes sense and is consistent with my own limited experience doing this. My second book, Viper, which is about Colombia and FARC, has been selling abysmally, especially compared to Scorpion, which was more relevant, dealing with Afghanistan, the Taliban, and nuclear proliferation. In fact, Viper sales really only picked up last year during the time the Colombian peace talks and FARC disarmament were topics in the news.

So, we shall see how well Scorpion II does, since it covers Ukraine, which is somewhat topical these days, at least to those who follow world events, and also Georgia (the country), which I fear might leave a lot of people scratching their heads and wondering why the heck they should care about Georgia.

Of course, this isn't really an issue once you have a large audience and your primary character has a fan base. If Mitch Rapp goes to Colombia next year, it's still going to be an instant best seller.

As a reader and a writer, I'm always interested in stories that cover more obscure/fresh locations and subject matter rather than the same old terrorist plots, but from a marketing standpoint, trying to appeal to the largest audience possible, that might not have been a wise approach, especially for my first few books, before I've established a wider audience. 

I'd be very curious to hear readers' opinions on this and your thought process when it comes to deciding to try a new author or book, so please leave a quick comment below.

On a final note, one of the two books I'm currently writing will cover ISIS and the ongoing "cold war" between the Gulf Arab states and Iran. Not entirely because I'm seeking to boost sales, but because I feel it's time to cover the Middle East and my story has a slightly different take on things.  I'll post more details here as the project advances.

Monday, October 16, 2017

Good Reads Page Now Up

I now have my author page on Good Reads up and running; you can find it here. Good Reads is a great site in general for keeping track of authors and finding new books, and now if you're so inclined, you can follow me, private message me, leave comments, review/rate my books, and other Social Media-type things. I don't know, I'm not very savvy or interested in social media, but that's something I'll need to change going forward, because it's a pivotal marketing resource if you're an independent published writer like myself seeking to expand your audience. I suppose I should look into creating an author Facebook page like everybody else at some point...

Saturday, October 14, 2017

SCORPION II Available Now

SCORPION II is now available on Amazon here

If you enjoy action, espionage, violence, guns, international politics, and not having to spend $14.99 for an ebook then this just might be the book for you. 

And if this does sound appealing to you but you don't have a Kindle and you're thinking, "oh no, I don't have a Kindle, I can't read this :( ," then you can conveniently download the Kindle software for your computer, for free, here

Thursday, September 7, 2017

SCORPION II Plot Description




After a terrorist bombing in the former Soviet Union kills two Americans, the CIA brings independent contractor Avery back into the fold.

He jumps at the chance to return to the field, because among the casualties is a friend and a former teammate. His search for answers will put him in pursuit of an old enemy and pit him against a dangerous new opponent, an elusive and mysterious spetsnaz-trained operator who is every bit as determined and lethal as Avery.

From the frontlines of the ongoing conflict in eastern Ukraine, to the remote mountains of the Caucasus, and to a high altitude parachute jump from 35,000 feet, Avery will work alongside CIA paramilitary operators, mercenaries, and Special Forces soldiers to wage a campaign of shadow warfare against a hostile power eager to destabilize a strategically important Western ally.   

Friday, September 1, 2017

Almost there

I'm nearly finished with the edits on SCORPION II, but it's slow-going since this monster is nearly 130,000 words long, over 40,000 longer than SCORPION and VIPER, and I'm trying to take my time with this because it's easy to overlook mistakes, factual/technical errors, and typos when you're re-reading something you've spent so much time on and are so familiar with.

Hopefully, the holiday weekend will be productive, because I'm going to be very tempted to drop everything when the new Vince Flynn and Dalton Fury books come out this Tuesday.  

In the mean time, if you're looking for something to read over the long weekend, I highly recommend  you check out Steven Hildreth's The Ronin Genesis.

Monday, June 19, 2017

SCORPION II Chapter One



 I'm running a bit behind on SCORPION II, so here's the first chapter....




Although Avery was expecting his visitor, the sound of gravel crunching beneath tires still caught him off guard for a second, so rarely did the sounds of civilization intrude upon his quiet redoubt in the backwoods of northern Virginia’s Blue Ridge Mountains. His nearest neighbor was a retired dentist and Vietnam veteran, whose wife recently passed away, and Avery sometimes went fishing with the septuagenarian or took him into Roanoke for lunch. Rarer still, an army buddy might come by. Most frustratingly, a motorist might become lost and turn into his driveway, looking for directions.
Otherwise Avery received little human contact here, which was how he liked it.
Not to say that he was unwelcoming of today’s visitor. To the contrary, after sustaining a life threatening wound ten months earlier and just recently re-qualifying for service with CIA’s Global Response Staff (GRS), Avery had been looking forward to Matt Culler’s call. Still, his instincts told him something was wrong, that he probably wasn’t going to like what Culler had to tell him.
After all, it was beyond unusual for the head of GRS to come all the way out here to see Avery in person, instead of calling him in to Langley.
The Global Response Staff is a section of CIA’s National Clandestine Service (NCS) tasked with employing independent contractors, mostly former special operations soldiers and SWAT shooters, for security operations: guarding CIA bases overseas, babysitting case officers, transporting personnel or materials in combat zones. The best, most lethal of these operators are known informally as scorpions. Invariably their activities overlap into operations, especially in areas where the Agency finds it necessary to leave zero footprint by utilizing deniable agents on low-vis ops. GRS contractors often worked alongside Special Activities Division paramilitary operators.
Wearing shorts, a tank top, and running shoes, and well-tanned from time spent outside during the recent summer months, Avery turned off the fire on the stove and stepped out from the combined kitchen-dining room into the living room, crossing the spotless hardwood floor to the front door.
The outside air was cool and musty and smelled of pine needles. The land around the ranch house was well shaded by the towering trees that vaulted up on either side of the driveway and around the yard.
By the time Avery descended the three steps on the wooden porch, the stopped Lincoln Town Car’s driver side door swung open. Culler climbed out with ease while his driver, a security protection officer, remained behind the wheel.  Culler was in far better shape than most fifty-plus year old men, and he definitely stood out amongst CIA’s middle-aged, suited, executive class. But unlike most of Langley’s Seventh Floor suits, Culler was a former ops officer, a veteran of Afghanistan and elsewhere. He’d also formerly headed CIA’s Counterterrorism Center. He was one of the few people at Langley Avery actually respected.
Handshakes were exchanged.
“You’re looking well,” Culler said, appraising Avery. The comment was a genuine observation, not an intro to contrived perambulatory pleasantries, which Culler never bothered to go through with Avery, because he knew Avery had little regard for such social customs.
The last time they’d talked in person, Avery had been restricted to a hospital bed at Walter Reed, with tubes sticking out of him, connecting him to a half a dozen blinking and beeping machines. After being stabbed in the side with nearly the full seven inches of the Viper’s combat knife, Avery underwent multiple surgeries to fully repair his torn oblique muscles, severed blood vessels, and perforated large intestine.
The wound took over four months to fully heal. The first month was by far the worst, because he’d also suffered from infection, which nearly became life threatening. It was the closest Avery had ever come to dying. He’d come close to bleeding out by the time the FBI and Homeland Security agents reached him on the California-Mexican border, where he’d lain in his own blood and vomit, barely conscious.
Recalling that afternoon, Avery could still feel the distinctive sensation of the titanium blade inside his body, the sudden wave of nausea and numbness that overtook him, and the deep burning pain. The thought of it still made him feel sick and cold and sent a chill through his nerves. He’d been shot before, but that was nothing compared to the damage this knife had caused.
The ordeal didn’t end with the painful recovery process.
After, Avery found the sudden loss of muscle mass, strength, and stamina to be the singularly most wretched, depressing feeling he’d ever known. Worse, he wasted three weeks drinking nearly every day, all day, breaking almost a decade of sobriety, until he finally decided to stop feeling sorry for himself and get his shit together. That was followed by another miserable week of riding out the withdrawal symptoms.
Avery spent the next five months working out and training hard to rebuild what he’d lost, determined not to retire early from doing the only thing at which he’d ever been particularly good, the only thing that gave his life some vague sense of purpose. He still hadn’t quite gotten back up to his former maxes on squats and deadlifts, and he doubted he ever would, but his run times were the best they’d ever been since when he was a twenty-two year old army Ranger. And he could still give a navy SEAL or Delta operator a run for their money on the gun range, which he sometimes did.
After getting back in shape, there came another month of going through the exhausting bureaucratic hoops and procedures to get reinstated with GRS, and even that was a close call. The psychological evaluators knew Avery was holding something back, but Avery wasn’t about to tell anyone about the kid he saw murdered in Colombia and the lingering affect that had on his psyche. That job had been totally off the books anyway. He also didn’t tell the psychologists about the drinking relapse, either. He only told them what they expected to hear, about how he was coping after coming so close to death. They wanted to make sure he didn’t exhibit any PTSD symptoms and that he handled the psychological stress in a healthy way, which he generally did.
“Good as new,” Avery replied, “except for the new scar on my side. Hopefully, that detail doesn’t get out to anyone, but at least it’s not visible.” His body carried no other visually distinguishing features that could potentially be used to identify him. “Though there’s only one group I know of who would have a personal interest in me anyway.”
Culler knew what Avery meant. “Far as we know, the Russian mafiya have no reason to know of your involvement with what happened on the Mexican border, so they won’t be able to make any connections.” He paused. “And that’s a good thing, because I’m sending you into FSU again.”
Avery recalled unpleasant memories of his mission into Tajikistan and Belarus the previous year. Chasing down loose nuclear material headed for the Taliban. Putting down a former friend turned traitor. When Culler called yesterday, Avery was expecting to be sent to Iraq or Syria to make life difficult for ISIS.
But FSU?
He sighed.
Well, it wasn’t like he could turn Culler down now. Avery was extremely lucky to have gotten a second chance with Langley as it was. Beggars could not be choosers.  
“I know it’s not what you expected, but after you hear what I have to say, you’ll want this,” Culler said. Looking Avery in the eye, he added. “Trust me.”
That grabbed Avery’s attention and re-focused his thoughts, though he knew Culler wasn’t above a little manipulation. He’d subtly poked Avery’s ego before to get him to take on a shit job no one else wanted.
“What is it?” Avery asked.
“Did you hear about the car bombing in Tbilisi three days ago?”
“Yeah, I saw it mentioned briefly on CNN. What, ten or so people were killed? A couple Americans from a natural gas company are among the dead. Some local militant group that no one ever heard of claimed responsibility.”
“It wasn’t a terrorist attack.”
“You know something CNN doesn’t?” The question was sarcastic, but not entirely without merit. Almost every office TV at Langley was tuned to CNN throughout the day.
“It was quite clearly a targeted assassination, but the White House and Langley aren’t going to acknowledge that,” Culler said. “They hit one of our NOC officers, and his bodyguard. The bomb was rigged to their vehicle, though that particular detail won’t be made public for obvious reasons of OpSec.”
If the identities of the slain CIA personnel were revealed, then the identities of other officers and agents connected to them and the front company would potentially be put at risk. Even in death, the slain officers would have stick to their cover story.
“Who did we lose?” Avery asked, unprepared for Culler’s response.
“Poacher was running security for the NOC.”
A dozen memories flashed across Avery’s mind. Afghanistan. Poacher’s bearded face and big grin. Being welcomed into Poacher’s home and meeting Katie. He remembered the last time he saw Poacher, seven months ago, at a Task Force Dagger reunion BBQ.  
Avery took a deep breath. He wanted to throw up. He wanted to lash out and punch something, anything. Instead he said, “Who’s responsible?” His voice cracked a little. He felt his stomach churning.
“So far we’re going with the Black Fist, an unknown militant group based in the Caucasus that initially claimed responsibility.”
“I never heard of them.” And Avery’s knowledge of the worlds’ insurgent and terrorist organizations was near encyclopedic.
“Neither has the Eurasia Desk or the Counterterrorism Center at Langley,” Culler admitted. “And the Georgian security services don’t seem to know a hell of a lot other than the Black Fist is a small, close knit, radical offshoot of Adamon Nikhas, an older Ossetian nationalist group. They’re also connected to assorted Armenian and Chechen groups in the region. The Georgians claim this is all bullshit and that the group’s financed off-the-books by the Kremlin as a proxy terrorist force, but we have nothing substantial to support those allegations. We have to take anything from Tbilisi with a grain of salt.”
“Anything useful from the investigation so far?” asked Avery.
“The detonator used in the blast has been linked to a theft from a Romanian munitions train earlier this year. Sometime when the train stopped in a city called Brasov, on its way to Bulgaria, four containers of eighty detonators went missing, along with dozens of kilos of RDX plastic explosives. Along with the FBI, Langley sent people to coordinate with Romanian investigators in Brasov.”
Avery tried to listen, but he’d inadvertently started to tune out. The news of Poacher’s death had broken through even his normal stoicism. He didn’t even notice when Culler paused for several seconds.
 “Look, Avery, this is way bigger than the guys we lost in Tbilisi, and I’m not sending you on a routine counterterrorism op here. In fact, given your personal connection to Poacher, I’d prefer not send you. I need a clear head on this.”
“So why me then?”
“Regardless of the possible Ossetian terrorist angle, what happened in Georgia is just the latest in a long string of compromises we’ve experienced in the former Soviet Union over the past year. Ever since Tajikistan and Belarus, really. Chief of station Tallinn was exposed and expelled from Estonia. Case officers have been caught in stings and deported from Russia, Belarus, and Turkmenistan. We’ve lost highly placed agents in Ukraine and Azerbaijan. The Russians obviously have a line into the National Clandestine Service’s operations in the FSU, and it comes at a time when Putin’s become increasingly aggressive in places like the Baltic, Ukraine, and Syria.”
“So that’s why you’re here,” said Avery. “You don’t know who within NCS might be compromised right now or, worse, a double agent.”
 “Partially, but not exactly. D/NCS came directly to me with this and asked for you by name,” Culler said, referring to the director of the National Clandestine Service, the CIA’s top spymaster.
Avery frowned as he thought it over and put the pieces together. Counterterrorism was his normal province, not the former Soviet Union or conventional espionage work. He knew there was only one thing that connected him in any way to anything involving Russia.
“Cramer?”
Culler’s tight-lipped expression answered for him.
“He’s dead,” Avery said.“I watched him burn.”
“All of the assets we’ve lost so far, including the NOC in Tbilisi, were active before Cramer’s treason. Cross referencing their 201 files, they’re all veteran officers with prior experience in Eastern Europe or Central Asia, and they have all worked with Cramer on past assignments, or at least have crossed paths with him operationally in one fashion or another. D/NCS doesn’t believe that to be a coincidence.”
Robert Cramer was an almost thirty-year CIA veteran who had been slated to end his career as the chief of station in Dushanbe when he conspired with the Krasnaya Mafiya to fake his kidnapping and murder. He then helped organize a network smuggling highly enriched uranium from Belarus to the Taliban.
“Makes sense,” Avery said. “We know Cramer was collaborating with the Russian services. Organized crime or state agencies, there’s no distinction between the two in Russia. They probably debriefed him very extensively, and we don’t know just how far back their relationship goes or the extent of their network.”
“D/NCS always thought that shit with Cramer would back to haunt us one day. He might be right.”
“So where do we start?” Avery asked. “We wouldn’t be talking if you didn’t already have something to go on.”
“If this does go back to Cramer, then it might be worth starting with the only loose end you left in Dushanbe.”
Avery took a couple seconds to search the names and faces stored in his mind. “Ramzin.”
“You got it.”
Oleg Ramzin was a Russian Federal Security Bureau (FSB) counterintelligence officer who had been assigned to Dushanbe. Ostensibly he was Cramer’s agent, providing cover for status for their relationship and frequent meetings. In reality, Ramzin was Cramer’s link to the Krasnaya Mafiya, and he helped Cramer organize the nuclear smuggling network.
“We know the Lubyanka promoted him shortly after Tajikistan,” Culler said, referring to the FSB’s headquarters. “He’s a colonel now. He stayed in Dushanbe for another four months after everything that went down there, did some work in Moscow, where we know he personally briefed Putin on a highly classified matter, and that’s when we lost him. Moscow station confirmed Ramzin’s still doing fieldwork, but he’s almost certainly adopted a pseudonym after you compromised him in Tajikistan.”
“Sounds more like a dead end than a lead,” Avery observed.
“Not necessarily. NCS’s Russia Desk might have an access point to Ramzin. His name’s Yefremov. He’s also FSB, Ramzin’s former superior officer and mentor. They served in Chechnya together. According to the analysts who profile Russian intelligence officers, Ramzin and Yefremov are still real close together.”
“And you know where to find Yefremov, I take it?”
“We do, as a matter of fact.”
Avery read Culler’s expression, felt an unpleasant sensation in his gut, and said, “You’re going to tell me something I won’t like, aren’t you?”
“Hey, if this was going to be easy I would have gone to someone else.”
“Where is he? Syria? Fucking Moscow?”
“If only,” Culler said without humor. “Yefremov currently runs counterintelligence for the pro-Russian separatists in Donbass.”
Avery blinked and hesitated before responding as he digested this. Suddenly his last ops in Colombia and Mexico didn’t sound so bad. “Yeah, well that’s pretty fucked.”
“We can get you into Donbass easily enough through a local Ukrainian agent network.”
Avery opened his mouth to protest, but Culler cut him off.
“Don’t worry. We know they’re clean, and they have a contact in Donbass that can provide support and point you in Yefremov’s direction.”
“So what do you expect me to do?” Avery said. “Sure, I’ll have a chat with Yefremov, but he can’t possibly walk away from this, you understand?”
He suddenly realized exactly why Culler came out here instead of summoning him to Langley for this discussion, and the sick feeling in his stomach grew deeper and more pervasive. Culler didn’t want any official record of Avery’s role in this. Avery generally targeted sub-state actors, but now Culler, likely with D/NCS’s blessing, intended to put him directly up against another power’s agents. 
“After I’m through with him,” Avery went on, “it’s not like we can let Yefremov go back to Moscow reporting that Americans grabbed him and questioned him about Oleg Ramzin’s whereabouts. Somehow, I also doubt you’ll be able to just stick Yefremov in one of your secret prisons in Poland or Romania, assuming I’d even be able to bring him out of Ukraine undetected.”
“What happens to Yefremov after you’ve spoken with him is not our concern,” Culler said bluntly. “D/NCS intends for this to be totally deniable. Deep black. Zero footprint.”
This meant if Avery was detained by the Russians, he was fucked. But what else was new? “How am I even supposed to talk to Yefremov? My Russian is shit.” He’d been trying to learn the language after the operation in Tajikistan and Belarus, but his progress was slow.
“According to the profilers, Yefremov speaks decent English, like most senior Russian intelligence officers do.”
“Because it’s not like the analysts ever get something wrong.” Avery couldn’t help but roll his eyes. He had little use for the Directorate of Intelligence, which was comprised predominantly of academics and subject matter experts with little, if any, firsthand experience in their areas.
“This intelligence is reliably confirmed,” Culler said. “There are several reported occasions where Grigory Yefremov spoke English, and that comes not just from us, but from the British and German services, too.”
 “There’s no way I can pull this off as a singleton. Where’s Flounder and Reaper?”
“They’re at the Point, but they’re active duty Ground Branch. D/NCS can’t just order them to-”
“He won’t have to. If they know this is connected to Poacher, they’ll be onboard. Trust me. There’s no security risk. Remember, they were with me in Tajikistan, and they know all about Cramer.”
“Look, Avery, there’s-”
“Either I get Flounder and Reaper, or I don’t go. It’s that simple. I’m not going into Russian-controlled territory in a war zone with only some local assets for back-up.”
“Alright,” Culler finally relented, knowing that once Avery decided on something there was no room for negotiation. He wouldn’t have felt good about sending Avery into Donbass alone anyway. “I’ll get D/NCS to clear it with SAD, but you better bring everyone back.”
“Don’t worry, Matt, I know the drill. The Seventh Floor would rather have us dead than taken alive to the Lubyanka. I share the sentiment. Fuck spending the rest of our lives in a Russian prison with our faces all over the news.”
In 2014, the bodies of several Americans with M16 rifles, Meals Ready to Eat (MRE), and other American-manufactured armor and kit, turned up in eastern Ukraine after a firefight between Ukrainian soldiers and separatist forces. The State Department denied any knowledge of or responsibility for the Americans, even after a couple of them were identified by Russian intelligence services as contractors with Greystone, a private military corporation and former Blackwater affiliate that was registered in Bermuda and often did work for the Agency and allied foreign governments..  
Avery had long accepted that he’d meet a similar fate one day. He knew it was just a question of when and where.